1) The pitch.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=17gxxUrY-mM&feature=emb_title
2) A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch.
From the previous elevator pitch, I received only good feedback, which is something that makes me really happy as it demonstrates that people liked it. Therefore, for this elevator pitch, I did once again but with even more energy and more enthusiasm, as I feel this is a very important field to improve.
3) What did you change, based on the feedback?
As the feedback was good, I tried to do it with more enthusiasm and energy. This time, I think the overall quality is better and looks more authentic, and that I truly believe in my business idea. I look forward to keeping improving.
Hi Richard,
ReplyDeleteI think this parking spot idea is very smart. I know I wait a long time to find parking in crowded public areas, but, with this app, I can reserve my spot and get a notification when the spot opens. So only thing is that not many people are going to want to wait until their spot opens. It could take hours, but clever idea. Good work!
Hey Richard! I think you did great for your third pitch. I could definitely notice the difference in energy of this pitch from your last one. I love that you had a phone prop, it makes the whole pitch much more engaging. This venture is gonna do so well for you!
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